I had waited long for you
I burned my soul in fire
The fire of love and passion
This glows for you, day and night
You hear the whisper of your mind
Murdered my heart, killed my pride
I fright, but I tried,
I cried, but I tried,
But it does not make things alright
Darling
I put my soul in the fire
Keeping all the love aside
I may seem alive but I m dead inside
I am taking my soul to the sky
One day, you will feel the heat
One day, you will cry
You will hear my whisper
Insane you will cry
But
I will disappear
Like a smoke, I will fade
Like an ash, I will leave no Trace
………………
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so touching, so beautiful. Thanks and Love, nia
Thank you so much Nia. Words straight from heart , i m glad that you liked it.
I like the way you put the invisibility into your passionate poem..
Thx alot HudleyFlipside.
I tried to write what i feel and glad that you liked it.
Beautiful
thx 🙂
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Well done Afsheen. Very powerful piece !! 😀 😀 😀
🙂 really Mr.Ralph ? i tried to write a poem and that’s what i did … i m glad that you liked it 🙂
Yes I did like it 😀
thank you so much 🙂
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Loved the irony of the verse. Specially your closing lines jumped out at me, and I quote,
“…..I will disappear
Like a smoke, I will fade
Like an ash, I will leave no Trace.”
Do I sense an urge to hurt, to hit back, to become a martyr while doing this?
Shakti
Thanks for liking it Mr.Shakti Ghosal,
I really don’t know what it is.. i felt it yesterday and i write it down. I have never written any poem or verse in English before. This just happens..
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